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Thursday, March 18, 2010

standing on wet cold rocks
as waves crash below
sending spray up
when a big one appears
out on the lake
you try to run away
too late
you got wet

my recent poetic fixation with the sea and water and such will make an interesting case study for
future psychiatrists. I was awarded last weeks perfect poet award. Thanks to Jingle
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13 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 18, 2010 at 7:24 PM

    cool,
    you could add the logo, please let me know who you are going to nominate for week 10 perfect poet award, one poet please, from what you know in our Rally!
    thank you.

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 18, 2010 at 7:26 PM

    an event beautifully written,
    standing near the bay with waves,
    love the picture you paint with your words,
    simple, compact, and effective!

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  3. Brian MillerMarch 18, 2010 at 8:14 PM

    haha. wonderful and fun...love me some waves...

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  4. AnonymousMarch 19, 2010 at 4:26 AM

    I like this .You make we want to go for a swim.Its so playfull .

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  5. AnonymousMarch 19, 2010 at 10:37 AM

    nice-- the lines splash like waves...

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  6. AnonymousMarch 19, 2010 at 12:46 PM

    The North Shore described perfectly JP!

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  7. techyfoxMay 26, 2010 at 8:27 PM

    Reminds me of when you are at like busch gardens and forget to stay away from the edge of the bridge

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  8. anthonynorthMay 27, 2010 at 12:48 AM

    Yes, it's hard to hold back the wave, isn't it?
    You'll find mine here.

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  9. AnonymousMay 27, 2010 at 6:44 AM

    this made me miss being near the ocean. good stuff.

    -joe

    http://joesuzz.wordpress.com/2010/05/25/car-ride-a-poem/

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  10. AnonymousMay 27, 2010 at 3:34 PM

    A gesture-- funny and yet touching. Nicely done!
    http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/

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  11. TimKeetonMay 27, 2010 at 6:02 PM

    Very nice.

    Thanks for sharing. I hope you will visit my sites:

    Tim Keeton - A Writer's Tale

    and

    The Undead Poets Society

    Rhyme on!

    Tim Keeton
    (Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
    A Week 19 Perfect Poet Award Winner

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  12. joannaMay 27, 2010 at 8:26 PM

    A lingering moment in time -- daring the wave to catch you --- some times you win sometimes you don't but oh so much fun.

    Joanny

    came by jingles thursday....

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  13. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJuly 8, 2010 at 10:45 AM

    http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/07/08/the-celebrate-poet-of-june-award-nomination-announcement/

    time to vote again,
    please scan the links and vote for 1 to 20 poets, thank you in advance!

    next Rally post will be on July 21, 2010.

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